A Late Night

A Late Night

A Poem by YourXArtist
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Sort of a Haku that somewhat rhymes and has syllabols that repeats 3,4,4,3,4,4,3,5. it's about waiting for someone which at first, seems stood up, but then they arrive there with roses. :)

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All alone

Nothing to do

It's lonely here

Without you

The candle light

Is burning low

A love song's

On the radio

Still not here

It's getting late

What's going on

I can't wait

Then there you are

You're standing there

Dripping wet

With roses in hand

© 2010 YourXArtist


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YourXArtist
Hope you like it, Please comment. ^_^

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This one astounded me, I like the feel of this one and the flow. This is remarkable. You have talent.

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loved the end...

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Added on November 14, 2009
Last Updated on February 19, 2010
Tags: romance, poetry, poem, alone, you, late, night, hakiu, syllabls, rhyme, rose, radio, candle, light, song, burning

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Hey. My name is Courtney. I love to write, mainly poems. I am shy and I can speak my mind better through writing poems rather than through talking. I'm like and outcast pretty much, but it's ok I gue.. more..

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