A Walk Into An Ocean

A Walk Into An Ocean

A Poem by YourXArtist

About a girl who walks into an ocean to her death.

She's walking into a cold bitter sea
She can feel the icy water touch her on the knee
She continues to walk further and further
Then it starts to hurt her
Her vains freezing like ice
At first the coldness felt nice
But then it makes her vains turn darker blue
And thats when her uncaring thoughts grew
She's shivering and cannot stop
And soon she hears a pop
She falls deeper and deeper under the water
She starts to wonder if sombody saw her
Gasping for a breath and pleading for a rest
Sinking to the bottom and curled in a nest
With her eyes closed and unable to breathe
Then she sinks and goes deeper underneath
She's at her watery grave
It would of been better if she would of been saved
It's a walk into an ocean nobody will forget
Now she is laying in her underwater pit


© 2009 YourXArtist

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Wow, This is amazing, I liked this alot!

Posted 10 Years Ago

It's absoulutely amazing!
I LOVE it! =)

Posted 11 Years Ago

it's very scary..... but great work ......... :) 10/10............

Posted 11 Years Ago

its dark and scary how things like this do happen. Its written well tho, good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on November 14, 2009
Last Updated on November 16, 2009




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