IntroductionsA Chapter by Zack_RitesWe are introduced to the group of teenagers traveling around the entire globe. In this chapter we meet and learn a little about the characters personalities.“I’m telling you
it doesn’t make sense! It just doesn’t. Make. Sense!!” A rough, patchy voice
rang through the clearing in the woods. “Oh,
my god. Shut UP!” another voice, female this time, laced with annoyance called
out in close range of the first. “Stop talking!” “LISTEN
JUST STOP TALKING. I WISH EVERYONE IN THE F*****G GROUP WITH STOP TALKING!” The
two of them had been going back and forth like this for quite some time. It
sounded like two birds squawking the same lines to each other. ‘Shut up. Shut
up. Shut up.’ It had been going on for around an hour, and the rest of the
group was getting tired of it. The two fighting were Aliesia and Jueliard. They
fought like this constantly, and everyone else in the group thought they were
going to end up f*****g in the forest at this point. Their quarrel was
interrupted by another; “Keeree
slushme anp varmeet eerneeru![1]”
This
new voice, obviously foreign, if you couldn’t tell, was angry, abrupt and rock
solid. “Keeree
koik varmeet eerneeru...[2]” There
was an awkward moment of silence, then; “….what
did you ju- WHAT? WHAT DID HE JUST F*****G SAY?” Jue’s voice shocked them all.
“KARMIE! You’re this freaks translator. TELL ME WHAT HE SAID!” “AH!
Uhm, o-okay!” Shaking the newly mentioned girl answered the intimidating
entity, and now spoke to the one with foreign tongue. “H-hom sotoro?[3]” The
pause following these words was a long, agonizing moment, ending with a simple,
little word. “Lor.[4]” “O-okay. Hnn..”
Karmie, the one now translating got ready to speak. “H-he said: ‘You should
stop talking.’” She took a pause and a breath. “’You never stop talking’” She
closed her eyes tight and balled her hands into fists at her side. “O-okay
J-jue? Nhgg…” “Yea, well…” Jue,
muttered in response. “Yea, well, what, WHAT does he know anyway? All HE is a
f*****g TREE-LICKER” He spat his words like venom. “JUE” “GAH!” “KOYAMA NOR[5]” All three of the
later voices rang out at the same time. The teenage tongues mixing together in
a very unusual way. There were four
people sitting around the campfire, and the tension was thicker than the smoke
rising up to the darkening red sky. Jue was the start
of this small outburst, as he was the start of ALL the fights in the group. He
was a gruff, angry seventeen year old, that was a perfect match for his rough
voice. His jet black hair hung down to his eyebrows and gleamed in the fire’s
light. His hair was just short of his shoulders and was a layered mess. His
face was relaxed, surprisingly for this situation. His chin was loose, and held
little emotion in it. Hair danced on his chin in a short patch, black, just
like his hair. His side burns added to his dark appearance. His entire, large,
body was relaxed. His six foot two figure was covered by a simple black shirt,
the sleeves made it down to his elbows and the hem reached all the way to his
mid thigh, and the rest of his legs were covered by the black pants he wore. As
he sat there, unmoving and calm he kept his eyes closed, his lids, dark from
sleep deprivation, moved as his eyes did, almost resembling the R.E.M. cycle.
His jaw only slightly clenched when he heard the next voice speak. “Can you guys please,
please, stop fighting?” This was Aliesia, the other one that ignited the short
argument. “You’ve been fighting since we picked Axio up! That’s like..” she
took a moment to recall the information, “A MONTH!” The words she spoke poured
out of perfectly pink, plump shiny lips. They formed a half pout, and she
puffed out her cheeks. She was sixteen, but sometimes acted as though she was
six. Her shorter stature, she was only around five foot five, added to her
childish appearance. The only thing that reminded the group of her age was her
large, and visible bosom. The fact she was very large, in that area was
highlighted by her dress, which consisted in a dark purple corset and lighter
pink toned purple skirt. She was tense and sitting, with Karmie on a large
leaf, as big as an area rug. She glared at Jue and pouted, almost asking him to
stop fighting with her eyes. “P-please?” This
voice was Karmie. She was a scared timid girl, who, for some reason was always
high-strung and twitching. “Please don’t
do that, I really wish that you guys would stop yelling at each other … so
often.” Karmie was a very scared creature.
She often kept to herself while in the group and never really stayed
with them unless it was to translate.
Her outfit consisted of an orange sweatshirt, and tight black
pants. On her head was a blue hat that
was made to look like a rabbit, with a cartoon-like face and two long
ears. Her skin was a dark brown colour
and greatly contrasted with the orange of her sweatshirt. Her entire body shook as she spoke and,
trembling, her hands tugged on her hair, which was a bright blue colour and
glowed in the light of the nearby campfire. Karmie was from Southern Influasia,
a place no one usually visited and because of this no one really understood her
culture. She looked over to her left, where Aliesia sat. Ali was the only one
that didn’t scare her, and so she usually stayed close to her when she was near
the group. “Please?” The group went silent for a minute, but to the trembling
girl it felt like hours. The only sound was the crackling of the camp fire. Jue’s eyes
scanned the group that was before him. Karmie, he found her sweet, and easy to
talk to. Aliesia, oh how she annoyed the hell out of him. She was like an
annoying little sister. Slowly his eyes moved to Axio. He couldn’t stand Axio.
Something about him irked his entire being, and, in his childish anger, he spat
racist remarks and slander at the younger boy. Jue looked Axio over quickly.
His features were soft. A slender neck and chin, piercing black eyes that were
glazed over with anger, and a small nose. His hair was tied up in a pony tail,
and he wore a headband. Some of his hair spilling out from over the band was
tucked behind his ear. His clothes were that of his village. A simple animal
skin top and shorts. His sandals were from Jue’s home town. He was forced to
buy him new shoes to protect his feet. He grunted at the memory. Axio didn’t
speak much of the language used in Noi; Klegish. ‘Klegish is the most popular
language in the world. Why doesn’t he speak it too?’ Jue would think to
himself. It was something his father had taught him as a child. People that
don’t speak Klegish thought they were better than everyone else, and therefore
didn’t deserve to speak it. Jue looked back up at Karmie and remembered her
pleas. He smiled softly and gave her an apologetic look before looking up at
Axio. “No.” [1] You both should stop talking! [2] You never stop talking. [3] This is agreeable? [4] Yes. [5] Untranslatable curse. © 2010 Zack_RitesAuthor's Note
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Added on July 20, 2010 Last Updated on July 20, 2010 AuthorZack_RitesStaten Island , NYAboutI am whoever you believe me to be. But does IDENTITY really matter? more..Writing
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