Revengica

Revengica

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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A good poem I wrote recently. Thought you might like it.

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I saw my soul in a big black hole,
On the back of your touch screen telephone.
Oh?
What did I say?
You had some family problems today?
Hey. That doesn't mean I'm game.
Hey. I'll never play that game again.
Erased you from memory,
You're far from a hook to me,
Unless of course you mean,
Your at the bottom of the sea.

I dreaded this day would come.
It was a whole lot of trouble,
But the deed is done.

Jaded and faded,
My heart invaded, created,
A whole new game with a whole lot of players.

© 2010 Zackery Alan Daley


Author's Note

Zackery Alan Daley
A good poem I wrote recently. Thought you might like it. The blue stripe represents a local officer who was murdered near the Arizona Utah border. The killer is still on the loose. Google it.

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nice write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the human soul colliding with techno strides through a framework of a world where nothing seems real anymore~
your rhythm moves with ease inclined toward a deeper beat pulled through the composition~
feels like music~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved the rhythm. You did a great job of showing emotion without overdoing it. Nice piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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