People Who Live in Glass Houses

People Who Live in Glass Houses

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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Midway in our life's journey, I went astray...
My things back please God, is what the women say.
Even if you said no,
I'm coming home.

I got too fucked up again
And my man puked off the balcony
Looking around and only seeing men,
I think it's time for me to believe I'm a writer now, see?

Digital love, a "long distance" suitor.
If I had a second chance I'd never gone that far.
Remember that Megan? Remember that Stan?
Give them a chance,
Just on more dance,
But no you couldn't and can't.
Catallus and Dante rest at last...

© 2010 Zackery Alan Daley


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people who live in glass houses should not throw stones at others. When our own lives are compromised by tiny subtleties, we should never be judgmental of others. We all have Megan's & Stan's whom we lost and we shouldn't have. Maybe this is my own take on your work , but its original, impulsive and earthy. I liked it. Great work Zach !!

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Good write.

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people who live in glass houses should not throw stones at others. When our own lives are compromised by tiny subtleties, we should never be judgmental of others. We all have Megan's & Stan's whom we lost and we shouldn't have. Maybe this is my own take on your work , but its original, impulsive and earthy. I liked it. Great work Zach !!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I have never read any poetry like this one. Its amazing, intriguing, raw and it also has a rhythmic flow to it. One of the best I have read in Writer's Cafe. Thank you Zachery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Dante was in hell a while. I believe are more hard headed then Dante was. We need to swim in s**t along time before we know we are in s**t. I like the story and the ending. This is a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its soooo real..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raw raw raw ~ ! i cheer in smiles at the digital in and outs of brutal delights such as this

Posted 9 Years Ago


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love the first stanza Cuz. The rest has its own feel charming but different, each stanza feels like its own poem. Perhaps that is what you were going for and perhaps i just dont know what im talking about. regardless i like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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the intricacies of intense emotions is perfectly concentrated in a wonderful mix of classic with raw expressives~

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is wonderful work, intense, thought provoking and a great way of portraying experiences and believing in the self!
Great poem
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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