Dead Dances

Dead Dances

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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Oh,
She dances on water.
So damn hot, she's gotta be the Sun's daughter,
But I caught her, believe it or not, I took the shot.
I told her to leave her arms alone, no more "cutters".

Let's compare scars and then share 'em.
Just talking to you is a Godsend,
We have nothing in common,
At first I was quite astonished.
Like how you are straight, 
and I smoke chronic. 

Shes cool, cool with that:
"Just don't let it affect US Zack..."

She dances on water.
Walking on it now doesn't seem like a bother.
The way she twirls and unfurls,
Doesn't just make me want her,
I want to flutter away,
Make everything okay...

© 2012 Zackery Alan Daley


Author's Note

Zackery Alan Daley
Picture is from "Final Fantasy X" - - - Depicting the character Yuna, who is thrust not unwillingly, but ill-prepared into a battle against everything evil. She is performing a ceremonial dance that allows spirits to cross over into the afterlife.

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A amazing video. It is remarkable how they can make video come alive. I enjoyed the poem. Allow the reader to fall into the video. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and video.
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Added on October 2, 2011
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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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