So fast.

I like bungie jumping.

I'm all buckled up.

My legs are weak.

My mouth is dry.

My brain's deserted me.

 

It's time to go.

Time to jump.

Time to soar.

 

I'm building up the energy.

I'm getting higher and higher,

with every jump.

 

Almost at the top.

Everthing is a blur.

My stomach trying to stay with the ground.

 

I'm there!

I'm at the top.

It feels like there's no such thing as gravity.

Everything seem's to be going slower.

I'm so high.

 

Then I'm rushing back down.

Gravity got it's claw on me.

I'm brought back down to reality.

 

That was fun.

Reviews

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

I got to wonder if you actually did the bungie jump or if you are just that good a poet you could imagine it and write it up.

I'd rather sky dive, more people have had accidents and died from bungie jumping, mind you not sure if that's taking into account the numbers of people that do both activities, the ratios could differ when you look at that.

Either way this poem really makes you feel as if you had just made the jump yourself! Now I wont need to bungie jump any time soon ;)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

I like this poem.

[Prateeksha Khot]

totally different. enjoyed reading it!