I wanna

I wanna

A Poem by Zeo Writer

I wanna feel your hair
I wanna
be your life
I wanna
live every moment
I wanna
want you all night
I wanna
hold your hand
I wanna
listen to your heart
I wanna
kiss your skin
I wanna
never let go
I wanna
not miss any moment
I wanna
marry you one day
I wanna
love and love
I wanna
wake up with you alway
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© 2009 Zeo Writer


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This was just a darn right cute one. I loved it. How can you get any better than that. You could tell you were speaking of a loved one because with a title of "I wanna" that is a large very gray area there....well, I was expecting you to be "wanna" some treasures....lol, but you narrowed it down to a specific love without even having to call a name.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love the simplicity of the format though the words carry so much meaning behind them. :)

-Ezra

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was just a darn right cute one. I loved it. How can you get any better than that. You could tell you were speaking of a loved one because with a title of "I wanna" that is a large very gray area there....well, I was expecting you to be "wanna" some treasures....lol, but you narrowed it down to a specific love without even having to call a name.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet and I can't even explain how much this relates to my fiance and me

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can't describe how genuinely precious the message in this poem is to me. It is very clear that there is so much love dying to be shared within the tone. I appreciate simplicity in poems such as this one. Well done! I hope to read more of your writings!

Posted 15 Years Ago


an addictive little poem

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow, I think someone found true love. A beautiful sentiment indeed. Great feeling to have. I enjoyed the read!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 1, 2009

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