The Kill

I have feelings for you,

but the moment I start describing them 

I want you to just close your eyes.

No peeking.

For what I am about to tell you...you will

drown, immolate and crumble before my work.

I'll start with your irises, squeezing them...

don't scream! 

It'll only be a few minutes till they stop...

cause I know you won't need them! 

There...blind you are in there! 

It's just ever since I laid my eyes upon you 

all I could do was not stop thinking how much 

I wanted to be with you. 

I couldn't stop those eyes from wondering anymore

so instead I took it upon myself to keep your eyes for me.

but really...

All I see when I see you,

An ocean, the snow and the space.

Crystallizing they form so lavishly when they weep.

A weeping I forget when I stop looking at you as well as 

when we are together dare I say, "It hurts staring this forbidden beauty."

The sky is the limit for those who seek out what is in our house but

when I stare at you deeper even the cosmos has me detached 

from where I am standing. 

A singularity effect you create when I stare at them as the light 

can't even escape so... zipped.

For the blood you drip when I see you hurt I feel the ocean

roar in maelstroms because your veins that course so deeply 

they stop.

Now let me douse you. 

I want to see the beautiful green-flame you were blazing so 

continuously in this room.

There I can't even begin to tell you how much your flesh 

means to me all crisp and crunched as 

you are but an empty shell!

Such impurity must be cleansed off immediately!

sighs

But really dear, you were burning for me when you told me

your heart was beating when I would leave you.

It was the sensual touch that when we felt for each other

when we began dancing in that burning dance floor. 

It was so sweet like two embers burning brightly in the 

coldest of nights it kept us warm you said...

our souls did because there it was so beautiful.

Break my heart, walk away for all I care!

I don't know about you anymore. 

I want no more of you! 

I don't want to be cared!

You're all that I despise now so just...

"shut up!"

"I hate when my eyes are closed, forget the no peeking part!

I love you and I know what you are saying.

I killed you. Admit it. 

For whatever look I gave you, it was a direct hit.

For every time we touched, it was the furthest from heaven

and closest to hell. 

As for this part I want you to know, no other man will keep me

better insured than you my dear.

Words have free meanings, two voices to tell you what they mean

but only one heart to give you a real reason why they said it.

So just love me for your coy self and when things fall apart, 

we will fix it for there are things in life

worth fixing and keeping it strong.

That my dear is why we call it unconditional love."

Reviews

[K.S.78]

So just love me for your coy self and when things fall apart,
we will fix it for there are things in life
worth fixing and keeping it strong.
That my dear is why we call it unconditional love."- I really love this piece it is so strong and complex at the same time!

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you! Thank you! It came out to me in a burst as I was going to bed at 6 AM. I was just really tired from writing a book and now am on the mission to rewrite a chapter again so I could get it ready for editing and publishing :)! Thank you very much!

[chicagogirlonce]

Your writings are so wise,somehow...full of emotional savvy and psychological insight

[E.V. Black]

"All I see when I see you,
An ocean, the snow and the space.
Crystallizing they form so lavishly when they weep.
A weeping I forget when I stop looking at you as well as
when we are together dare I say, 'It hurts staring this forbidden beauty.' "

The stanza above was my overall favorite. As I passed this stanza, my mind kept wandering back to it and reflecting on its loveliness. Perhaps it is the loneliness and the language that meld together so beautifully that makes my mind yearn to read it over and over. After I finished the poem, I reflected for a few seconds, particularly on my favorite stanza. Then, I decided that you truly so have a descriptive talent about you. You are very talented in bringing color to a blank canvas and making the reader feel the emotion you wish to impart.

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you very much. These are spur of the moment poems for me, when they pop and burst into the seams of my fingertips they make sure it has fully burst into all directions. To me I've always enjoyed the way I write without even putting a photo to it convey what I am saying. I believe that it is you, the reader, to create this gallery for me that I am writing about. I am simply but the architect and you are the builder of it. However you want it designed is yours to command. I simply gave in the seeds and you are to be the farmer to create it. Thank you very much for the review :)