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Did You Hear That?

Did You Hear That?

A Poem by Alexa Tasch
"

Been trying to write something dark

"

I slit your throat

With red cascades

I heard you scream

 

How did you do that?

 

You were supposed to be dead

I was sure

But no I guess you weren’t happy with that

The cops found me

 

Why the hell did you do that?

 

I could have gotten away with it

Poured gas on you and burned the evidence

Washed away sin in blood and burned in fire

I could have been happy!!!

 

Why can’t you see that?

 

You are so selfish and have been from the start

But you can still fix it

If you can still scream, you can still talk

Tell them it was suicide and I’ll forgive you

 

Will you do that?

 

NO! You deny everything

They deny everything

They tell me you didn’t scream, that you were dead

Apparently I screamed………I remember

 

You were dead

I did kill you

And in my pleasure,

I screamed….

 

© 2012 Alexa Tasch


Author's Note

Alexa Tasch
yeah I know, its not great, but it the first thing I've written in awhile

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Wow, I did not expect it to end that way! Good luck :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alexa Tasch

7 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Speak in Silence

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Wow, very dark but very entertaining with a lovely slice of madness. Loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good twist in the end. You better bring something to the Poetry Slam next Thursday!!!!!!!!! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


why can't they just be a good little victim and die?

loved it! lol

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is great! I love the twist you made, where you lived in the illusion of killing the otger person and you thought your screams were theirs. Quite melancholy actually. I really loved this piece. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on May 14, 2012
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Tags: dark, evil, creepy, bloody, murder, gore, death, kinfe, slice, police, crime, voices, crazy, people, scream, kill, horror

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Alexa Tasch
Alexa Tasch

Providence, RI



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My name is Alexa. I'm 19. I usually write instead of paying attention in my classes so I will post anything I think it good enough. Don't read my older stuff unless you're really committed because.. more..

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