Gift

Gift

A Poem by _mal

If the sand isn’t already slick
with oil, one day I’ll balance you on my hip
as the waves lap at my thighs
and be filled with joy
again, discovering the vastness of
the world
through your eyes

a second sight,
complete

perfection
your father’s fingers entwined with mine

© 2013 _mal


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_mal
First thing I've written for so long

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The greatest gift of all. You paint a lovely picture, I imagined myself sitting on the beach watching you playing with your child. A very beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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:: it's beautiful... more beautiful than anything i've read in a long, long time... you really should write more often, sweetheart... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


_mal

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the kind words. I really want to write more often, getting that itch now
.

10 Years Ago

:: awesome... i'm waiting to read more of your words... i love your work... :)

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Added on October 25, 2013
Last Updated on November 9, 2013
Tags: Child, love

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