American Youth Haiku #2

Cowboy Dan Screaming

For A Simpler Time Long Gone

Breaks Down Into Sobs.

 

Everytime You Think

The Wonder Of Life Ignored

Remember Beauty.

 

Trailer Trash Glory

Complete With Real Paper Plates

Sad Beauty Within.

 

Skies Full Of Gray Lakes

Everything Is Made Of Rocks

Acid Dissolves Thought.

 

Simple Short Poem

Closest Thing To Pure Thought

This Lonely Boy Has.

 

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

I would like to see the stanzas seperated to make it easier to read, but otherwise I think this is a nice peice of writing! Great job of expression.
Keep Writing! You have a knack for it.

[Paza]

I loved this. It was different and the form forces carefully chosen words, as you wrote "closest thing to pure thought". I especially loved "Trailer Trash Glory/ Complete With Real Paper Plates/ Sad Beauty Within". I think you captured something here.