American Youth Haiku #1

The Weather Is Null

The People Are Void And Dumb

But Aint Friendship Grand.

 

Her Body's Movements

So Entrancing To Me Now

Never Delivers.

 

The Ticking Of Time

Never Realize The True Speed

Until It's Too Late.

 

March Flowers Blooming

Smelling Like Rotting Fishes

Wouldn't Ever Trade It.

 

Love For Everyone

Sometimes Seems Very Childlike

But I Can Not Hate.

 

My Thoughts Are Vague

Never Fully Understood

Beauty Is Free Thought.

Reviews

[Skylar]

Beauty is free thought. Im quoting that sean.

[Paza]

"The Ticking Of Time/ Never Realize The True Speed/ Until It's Too Late" So true...absolutely. You've mixed so many things here...from profound truth (in the ticking of time) to mildly humorous (her body's movements). I really enjoy reading your work and will keep checking back for new posts.