Hate

I was mad at my mom so I wrote this poem.( I also made a doodle of her burning at the stake) I feel better now

Hate

By Abby Lent

Bitching, nagging  all I hear is noise you expect me to listen, you raise your voice. you think punishment is the key why can't you see a prep is hat you want me to be. I'm not I will never be. you will get nowhere by punishing me. To you I'm stupid, a b***h, I'm just useless. I geuss in your eyes all goths are satanic, all preps are angelic. I'll remember when I'm older all the names you called me. Now I want you to die. when I'm old all my wishes will come true. Armed with my bain and friends who feel the same.

Reviews

[Livenrite]

It's a great write however you might want to change the format by spacing out the lines that rhyme or connect. That should better the flow of your poem. Thanks for sharing:)