Dark days

I am in a darkened valley
The cliff pulls me closer
to the deadly edge

it calls my name

 like a soundless ghost.
Is it possible to come away from the edge?
The hold it has 

consumes my dreams nightly
dreams become nightmares
my soul becomes a darkened pit
my feet beg to stop
unwilling paces

 stride towards the edge

closer and closer

 soon to plummet
Soon to fall 

against the rocky bottom
The moon watches like a twisted killer
the light it emits

plunges me in a trance.

I open my eyes once again
hearing the hatred fly.

I feel the blade against my skin
I feel the ending must be near
death must be better than this
Death must suffice compared to pain
Life equals pain
After happiness
pain soon follows

Author's Note

not sure about this website so i will give one of my most recent poems to test it out

Reviews

[Larrycall]

Good write . Shows the true emotion