Emotionless

Her words grip my heart

scraping the muscle

rupturing the emotions

I stopped feeling now

I lie to her

"I love you" I spoke

but love was long gone now

The pain settled in

the struggle tipped my scales

This is the last time

I can't bear anymore tears

My heart is tranaslucent of feeling

my soul is evaporating

My words are not audible

I feel dead

Without a cause

Without a future

Reviews

[Yours Truly]

Love the raw emotion in this poem, I can relate to feeling like this at a time before, beautifully written.
-Yours Truly

[Pax]

The pains of a broken heart will always makes us feel dead. Its much bearable if we able to understand and heal its wounds as easy as you count one to three. Only time can tell if we find that sparks again, to feel alive inside and out. It was indeed very well expressed piece, well done!

[Trenton Colburn]

this is soo sad!! like i don't really know what to say other than you know how to effect your reader emotionally.. the subject is so depressing, but looking at how you wrote this, you did such a great job