Windows of Perfection

The poem is about a teenager whom is in love, it describes what goes on in a mind of this perfection and how the person feels about the beloved.

                                                      

 

When I am with you, everything is ideal !

When you are far away, my windows of perfection break.

You are my heaven and my song,

With you I can fight the evils  that surround our world,

No negligence, no suffering,

With you  my world is strong and perfect.

Acucena G.

Reviews

[Acucena G.]

the poetry is showing how irrational we are sometimes, especially when we are in love, and the person we love become the most importante thing in our lives, everything just become perfect and unbreakable.