As the Sun

love me as the sun loves the flower;

there are no benefits for the sun-

no gain of nourishments or life,

just witnessing the beauty and growth

is enough for the sun-

who loves the flower. 

Reviews

[Gregory Stires]

I love how you present the subject and feeling in your poem within such a short poem. I like how the simile describes the love the sun has for flowers and that witnessing the beauty of the sun is enough for You.