Silly machines- Human separation

A poem about crazy machines, which have lead to human separation.

That worthy creation;

who thought,

can be a cause for separation.

Not only of mind,

but of humankind.

 

I’ve seen and

I bore,

It can start a quarrel band

amidst happy lives

As sharp as I did with knives....

 

I suggest-

Don’t bring those crazy inventions

between your bests.

Let it be confined,

If you want to be peacefully dined.

 

 

Reviews

[Suditi]

Wow.
An honest, direct write.
It is sad really, that the new era machines have occupied such a huge place in our world..larger than we realize..and it is true..that though they are meant for better, faster communication many a times, they are the reasons which have created divides and distances.
Excellent theme. A very well written poem.

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

Nice work keep it up..... U brought out the meaning well n rhymes were gr8

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

I loved the rhymes of ur poem ......meaning was also clear..... Keep it up

[Aditi Mahajan]

@khalid
oh yeah :p

[SUGATA M]

Nice with a great lesson to learn....well composed

[khalid]

i think machines themselves are not separating or doing anything...imagine if there wasnt this pc im using, i wouldnt have read this nice poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the good message in this poem. Must separate life from all the new tools of life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[AK]

Nice poem! I love your message, it is very wise! Keep writing, Aditi!

[emman]

yes this true..nice poem