I Don't Know Erotica

So...can you teach me?

My lover...

I am a poet.

But I don't know erotica.

Will you please...

undress my ignorance

and write me an experience?

I am like a delicate paper,

consumed with the desire to be felt--

Just promise you'll be gentle?

Explore my exposed flesh with poetic touches

and discover a potential universe.

Wrap me inside the wonder of your words...

Until we explode--

in prose and poetry.

Yes...

Lose me in the pages of your passion...

Again and again.

Author's Note

*Blush* I'm not comfortable with free verse. And erotica.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Ah thew longings of youth.The first of anything is always the one remembered .

[Blue]

Yes, Tate. Thank you so much.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

hey this is just awesome..each line...!! Its not erotica...but its is..
Wait! May be not..
Consumed with a desire to be felt!!!! Wow!!

[Blue]

Haha. Thank you, Sandeep.

[Shaquana Adams]

undress my ignorance
and write me an experience?

Yes...
Lose me in the pages of your passion...
Again and again.

I like this one. It's erotic, yet soothing and nice. Great work :)

[Blue]

Thank you, Sha...

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

This is very soothing...in fact I do not want to call it an erotica...whatever has come out at the end of the effort is quite nice.

[Blue]

Thank you, Chand...

[Rita L. Sev]

Erotica is not my forte, either. There is a sweet and gentle tone to this, which is exactly how it should be... ;)

[Blue]

Thank you, Rita.

[Baby Ricochet]

I don't do much with free verse or erotica either. I leave that to Robbie or Ms Jewel. They're good at erotica. I'll stick to being a wise guy. Good Poem Kid

[Blue]

Yeah, stick to being that. :P Thank you, BR.

[Michael G. Smith]

I glad you are not comfortable with erotica. I find it to be soft porn. Some things are meant to be between a man and his and nowhere else no matter what others may say. I myself have pushed the envelope once or twice and I also felt uncomfortable about it. I find it sad when others accept sexual experiences out of marriage as love or romance. We have divinity within us and only good acts will nurture that.

[Blue]

Wise words from a wise man. I'll keep that in mind. Thank you, Mike.

[Lily Mae]

This is beyond erotica...is full of passion and a bit of a tease :) Well done.. I love it..xoxo

[Blue]

Thank you, Lily. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[annabellee]

Really great poem. You did very well :)

[Blue]

Thank you, Anna.

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Avinash]

Despite your otherwise claims I find it deep beautiful piece of erotica.

[Blue]

Thanks, Avinash. Maybe my judgment is wrong. Haha.