THE PERSON WHO CHANGED MY LIFE

My world came to an end 

I had no one to love ,I had no friends 

Then an angel of God send for me from above 

Showed me the meaning of love 

He made me be feel beautiful and special 

He gave me a reason to stay alive 

Made me realize that I am not the only one who goes through the pain 

He gave me my smiles my happiness and my life once again 

His songs healed the scars on my soul 

And now his music makes me whole 

No matter how old I get 

I will never ever forget 

The person who showed me how to live 

The person who changed my life 

Reviews

[devon]

This is a sweet poem, and it's a great dedication to the person who did in fact change your life. :)

Again, you have some minor grammar errors.

"He gave me my smiles my happiness and my life once again", should be changed to, "He gave me my smiles, my happiness, and my life once again".


"I will never ever forget" needs to be corrected to, "I will never, ever forget".


"I had no one to love ,I had no friends" to "I had no one to love - I had no friends."

"Then an angel of God send for me from above", this line is nice, but it is confusing. Maybe change it to, "Then an angel of God, sent from above,"?

Again, your poetry is really nice and the flow is great. :)

[That_Guy]

Awesome

[Marissa]

it's nice... I might would go through and change a few words but I mean i'm definately not good with grammar myself so I understand...it's very nice though I have felt this way and really you feel like that's the only person there or you which is bad, but I know this feeling....hope things get better.

[nigrum homonculus]

love the message behind this. an excellent read.

[....]

I totally loved this one, i loved the last two lines the most. Such a wonderful positive write.

[Holly]

Wow!! this is really touching! i love your work! it is very deep! keep it up!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the description and the positive ending. Good to find something to make you find peace and happiness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i have now read this for the second time and each time i fall in love with it once again amazing write, hope to see more thank you for sharing this amazing poem

[Wild Willow Blue]

Nice message.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very good :) A fantastic example of how a person can be so emotionally altered by another. Great poem!