Do You Know Everything About Wombats?

Do You Know Everything About Wombats?

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
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About my little half brother, Travis. He has Asperger syndrome and everyone at his school is making fun of him :( And he has an obsession with wombats :P

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You laugh 
At him.
You call
Him names.
"You're a retard!"
You call out.
"You're stupid!"
Well, did you
Know he has gotten
Straight A's 
On his report card?
Did you know
He is one of
The most smartest
People in his grade?
Did you know
He knows everything
About wombats?
You didn't?
Well, now I'm
Pretty sure you
Feel stupid for
Insulting him. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
:P Kind of sad, kind of funny, mostly stupid. Review anyways please!

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When people feel insecure about themselves, that's what really brings out the insults and how bad they dish it out on others. When they look at him they probably don't know how to respond to get to know him so instead they just take the easy way out which is make a joke out of something which isn't a joke.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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still a great write, good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow, my sibling has Autism. I can relate to this completely. I love this a ton, and I'm glad you came forward and spoke out against the new form of racism, as so many are trying to do.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

When people feel insecure about themselves, that's what really brings out the insults and how bad they dish it out on others. When they look at him they probably don't know how to respond to get to know him so instead they just take the easy way out which is make a joke out of something which isn't a joke.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its an awesome poem. Its sad that people make fun of him before they even know him.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wombats? Funny........this made me laugh.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"The most smartest" It's grammatically incorrect. I know that it helps with syllables in the poem, if you even go by syllables. The extra word makes it flow better, but it reads awkwardly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Don't you hate when people judge someone before getting to know them?

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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