Mental Abuse.

Mental Abuse.

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

Something is happening to me.

Something I can't control. 

My mind is abusing me. 

I don't have control over my brain.

No one does.

Why am I feeling this way?

I want it to stop.

I need it to stop.

It kills me, its daggers going into my skull.

I  need to get rid of this.

I need to run away.

I need to drown myself.

I need to hang myself.

I need to cut myself.

I need to do all these things to make the pain go away. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


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Alice In My Own Wonderland
It has no flow. It's bad. It's random. It makes no sense.

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it is not bad, its awesome and powerful! such a strong write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


"It kills me, its(it's) daggers going into my skull."

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think this makes perfect sense, I think we have all felt this way at least once in our lives. I really like this, I love your style of poetry too :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know everyone, including myself, have felt this way at one time or another. You are brilliant when it comes to capturing a specific emotion or memory. I really love all your work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You need to write more poetry. Frustration and disappointment can clog up a mind. You must dig through the s**t and find a reason to be happy. My life is going to hell. I stay strong for the people around me. Life can be a hard time. But those good times ain't so bad either. A powerful poem. Sometime we need luck and something to give us reason to be alive.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It does make sense. I could feel the pain of a person suffering from "dacnomania".

Posted 13 Years Ago


it isnt bad. its good. i can relate to it. i like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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