I Have To Move On

I Have To Move On

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

I have to smile through all the pain.

I have to pretend everything is alright.

I cannot tell anyone why I am this way.

If I do,
You would hate me too.

I have to move on.

I have to pretend I don't know you. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
Secret relationships suck.

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One thing always to remember a smile can change your whole day

Posted 11 Years Ago


secret relationships do suck!! X_X i can sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo relate to this!! well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The hardest things we have to face, good poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


They really do! I'm in one right now an it really sucks! Nice way of writing this though

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like it. It has meaning and I know life is like this for me and I really love the way it feels to read this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yikes, well my dear all I can say is I hate the predicament of this piece BUT it is written beautifully and the fact that it ends with ," I have to move on. I have to pretend I don't know you." Shows that the subject knows they won't die from it but might do it again to make sure it pans out differently. I like this piece a lot because this is a good take on human nature. We all bite off more then we can chew and kick ourselves for it later. Bravo :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Secret relationships are the worst.
They never stop feeling wrong :[

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well written the sentiment comes through loud and clear and there is some truth in what you say!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I hear you that secret relationships suck because someone always ends up hurt! Be careful darling!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A strong poem. All your poems are strong O___O"
Never been in secret relationship before...
Relationships in general, sometimes its all worth it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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