A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

A rant/free verse/random words on a page.

  I want to be
  Pretty on the

  I want to be covered
  In pearls and diamonds.

  I want to be the
  Girl with the prettiest

  I need to be Cinderella

  I need to feel good
  About myself.

  I want to be pretty again.

  I want everyone to like me
  For who I am and not
  What I do.

  I want to be clean.

  I need to be sweet. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland

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aww this is a beautiful write! thank you for posting this and sending me a read request!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wow this was just.... amazing
It touched me, as I can relate to this
A gifted writer with an amazing piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Seems as though you've stepped outside your element with this piece and in a good way. this was a clean cut poem and I really enjoyed it.Good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago

great job loved the poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Cutting edge honest.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This speaks the truth of many peoples lives and concious thoughts! Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very good poem. It has the emotion and intensity of what you want within the lines.


Posted 9 Years Ago

I like this one a lot. I can definitely relate.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Reflective and emotive. Nice and well written. Nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago

the use of 'again' makes i sound like the poem is referring to something that you had, but have lost, and te general impression is fabulous. Another lovely write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Alice In My Own Wonderland
Alice In My Own Wonderland

In your brain. There is some weird stuff here...

dont like my poems? too bad. dont like me? well the block button is write over there next to the flag button. dont like my friends? suck it. dont like anything? die already. more..


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