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Compartment 114
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Me, Myself, and I--- My three best friends!

Me, Myself, and I--- My three best friends!

A Poem by +Naomi+
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yay!

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I smile at myself in the mirror,
looking at me.
I say to me "You're ugly."
I say to myself "You're pretty."

My three best friends,
they always fight with me.
They leave me to fight with myself,
who always has problems with I.

I smile again.
I say to myself 
"I am better than Me, Myself and You."
Am I you?
Is you I?

Oh, Damn!
Now I'm confused again..

© 2010 +Naomi+


Author's Note

+Naomi+
just a fun lil poem...

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nicee write

Posted 12 Years Ago


There are different personalities of ourselves, though we might not know it. But we look at ourself from different perspectives than others look at us...no one sees us the same way, not even us. Me, Myself, and I is all you need to be happy. As long as you know who you are, that's all that matters.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how you incorperated the person vs self into this. Amazing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


lol okay...I'm slow XD I had to read this 5 times before I got it XD it's really cute and fun though! Good job daughter ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha this was really cute. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha! I thought this was a cleverly created poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hahahaha. Oh my! Now this i can so relate too! In fact I think I was there just the other night. I do have three best friends. the ones you spoke of and know what? They never screwed me either! lol Nice one gal!

In me fav's gal!!!

Mags xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahaha XDDD been there!! X3 nice one!! girls relate to it a lot! XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


AH I can relate to this(= nice work once again

Posted 13 Years Ago


haha its the same thing with me..... but I have no idea why im saying that. Im insane! thats a daily basis thing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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+Naomi+

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