My Love

My Love

A Poem by Amanda
"

trying something new....

"

 

 

How did I let this happen?

To fall so hard, so fast

The time, the distance...

Never having been together

 

To walk in the moonlight

To hear your voice

To feel your touch, your kiss

To have you in my arms

 

My heart yearns for you

For the things that may or may not

Come to pass between us

I suffer alone in this

 

My love, my very soul

Belong to you alone

If you want them, they are yours

For now, for ever.

 

© 2008 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
trying something different...some thoughts about a relationship that may or may not happen....

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I really enjoyed this. Seems as if it could be a great spoken word piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


The longing and ache for someone, its all there and that shock and surprise how it takes you over seemingly there is no rhyme or reason to it sometimes. I feel it in your words. I hope it was reciprocated :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I thought it was well written.
There was a line where you wrote
"To hear you voice"
But that was the only error i could find.
You can tell the emotion flowing behind this piece.
Good Write!



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written Amanda, cut and dry, no mystery here, I can relate to this, it is agony when we are unsure of our future ahead of us, especially when it involves someone we love so deeply.
Antony

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amanda

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