Meant for the Stars

When I think about her.

Her presence is spoken,

her warmth can be seen.

She moves like a dance,

and she speaks like she sings.

 

She moves my heart,

as the moon does the tide.

Like a wish and a star,

she's meant for the sky.

 

Meant for the stars,

like a heart for a chest - 

the moon for tonight,

or the sun for the west.

Author's Note

Comment away. Work-in-progress.

Reviews

[Mir]

How is this a work in progress!? This is very very beautifully written. I loved it! :D Cant wait to read the rest!

[Serenity Faith]

If this is just a work in process then I can't wait to see the finished product ^_^ Very well done!

[Miranda Richard]

Amazing :)

[Miranda Richard]

Love it!

[demureminds]

Lovely poem! Flows well and great analogies. It feels like it could be a really great song too if you're into that.

[Amanda]

I actually really like this. It flows nicely and gives a great image. Keep writing :)

[Cole Hayley]

nicely done, really comes off as a solid lyrical piece my friend. Welcome to the site, i look forward to reading more of you