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The Ballad of Ron Vidal

The Ballad of Ron Vidal

A Poem by AK
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For a dear friend who plays a Fender Strat like no other man alive...

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There’s a story that begs the telling
but not to the faint of heart
About a man that was called to play
his Signature Stratocaster guitar
Now some said this saint was moved by God
others said he was possessed by the Holy Ghost
Whichever or both, no mortal could tell
only the Lord in heaven knows
 
Now when he opened the case the light would blind
all that dared stand near
And when he reached to pick up that dreadful axe
the angels would start to cheer
He’d look over and grin, his mustache trimmed thin
and life as you knew it was done
And when he’d hook up the strap all the children jumped back
but they knew there was nowhere to run
 
Without mercy it seemed he’d plug in that thing
as his fingers started to twitch
He’d give one more chance as he cast you a glance
then reach over to throw the switch
Now it would take a few seconds for those tubes to warm up
so he’d start out kinda slow
But when his hands found the cords that Blues DeVille would roar
and the church began praising their Lord
 
Soon the drums would join in, the G&L bass free from sin
and that Taylor twelve-string would start to sing
Those old Fender amps would work out the cramps
the sum of all was a beautiful thing
Now there’s more story to tell about Ron Vidal
like when he’d light up with “There’s A Fire Burnin”
And the church truly one all worshipped the Son
when those “Train Bound For Glory” wheels started turnin’
 
Now after a time in the Spirit sublime
 that Strat would cool off a bit
As the saints blessed their God in His love cast abroad
the tempo would slow in the pit
The sweet notes from that guitar could draw folks home from afar
as Ron sang “Sweep Over My Soul” to the Lord
And when the night was far spent back in the case that Strat went
as each spirit in the Holy Ghost soared...

© 2009 AK


Author's Note

AK
Get well my friend! I love you.

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I once knew someone like this...
He's gone to the spirit world, years ago, by
his own hands, the same hands that could fly
on those strings. I would hope that your friend
could still play ... with such a gift anything could be.
i hope he makes a full recovery! Great tribute to
someone dear. Just awesome!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I once knew someone like this...
He's gone to the spirit world, years ago, by
his own hands, the same hands that could fly
on those strings. I would hope that your friend
could still play ... with such a gift anything could be.
i hope he makes a full recovery! Great tribute to
someone dear. Just awesome!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has a nice ring to it. Could see 'ole Ron pulling out his twelve string electric. There's nothing like great worship! I love to dance before the Lord and it's hard to keep my feet still when reading this.
Great rhythm and rhyme used here. I can almost feel it, and it has me wanting to join in...That's a sign of a well written piece, mind you!

Great job! Smiles, Carole

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's been a while since I've visited your page. I've never read a ballad about someone playing a stratocaster before. I found it very refreshing. I think this was a sweet tribute to your friend, and the way you describe it I wouldn't have minded being there to see it. *smile* I hope he got well, too. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...the rhyming scheme was awesome here....I loved the spill of it down the page...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautfiully written! We have some very different relgious views, however I really like how you were able to add them in. You described everything very well, and I loved the metaphors. Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i loved this piece. i liked the rhyming flow and could see everything going on in my head as i read. but not only could i see the story i could feel it as well. this was thrilling and very powerFULL. a write well done!
(also, thanks for reviewing panic's sister!)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this alot and the visuals were fantastic... great write!




B.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, to be able to hear him as he plays. Talent comes in all forms and when used in the most positive form the light always brightly shines.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, yeah! Now we're talking!
Love it!!!
Kelly

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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