Blue Moon

just some sad tears

The moon is blue 

The moon is weeping 

crystal frozen tears

fractal’ed through a blue rainbow.

Autumn wind is penetrating 

discontent and disarray 

deafening silos 

raging in viral fear

though narrow ears 

with chatter, ballots, and

cocked bullets.

The moon is weeping

The moon is blue.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

As the moon weeps we weep with
it ..as the world keeps falling into
despair

blue is such a cool color with
its calming effects yet we associate
it with sadness and feeling the blues

[Anuja Sharma]

The moon is weeping, the moon is blue. But lets just accept the fact that amidst of all the glooms, it is standing still, yet so beautiful, enlightening the world with its glow.
In the same way, lets just be strong enough to wipe our own tears and be our own sunshine.
This was a nice read albee. Stay blessed.
Regards,
Anu

[albee]

i wrote that moon in the darkest of winters that evolved into the brightest spring rainbows i have ever seen....

[Betty Hermelee]

The color blue is cold, reflecting the moon's mood; therefore the weeping; Autumn can be cruel, especially when there is a pandemic amongst us; I like the way you fit that in the stanza. I also like the way you describe cocked bullets; very prevalent in our society. Thus the reason the moon weeps.
Excellent!
Best, Betty

[albee]

The election, the Epiphany’21, pushed me with my personal problems, into the darkest winter of my. Spring gave me hope with her rainbows in the rain here in the upper left corner. Thank Betty. Your words to me are uplifting for me.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re quite welcome!

[barleygirl]

I wrote a blue moon poem, overly hopeful, capitalizing on the "blue wave" many of us had hoped for, pre-election. But now our current scene has been dragged thru the swamp, emerging so dreary & ugly & frustrating, I am quite sure your blue moon poem is the more accurate depiction of how this whole blue wave sorta crashed. I know it will be better, little by little, but I also feel that Grandmother Moon is weeping (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[poetgurl]

Loved those last two lines, I like how it summed up the write. awesome

[albee]

thank you...