Freedom to Blow

this is my add on to it :D i hope you like it

Running Free with the Wind

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Walking alone down a straight path

No one around

No one in sight

The breeze blows softly against my skin,

The air feels cold

It blows past me quickly.

I wonder why you can't see the wind?

You can feel it

You can hear it

But you can't see it.

Oh! how jealous I am of the wind

Invisible

Fast

Always on the go

Never in one place

Not told where to go

Never told what to do

Freedom is with the wind

Freedom is what it sings

Freedom go

Freedom say

Blowing cold air

Blowing quickly

The tree tops dance when it arrives

So fast

The ocean waves race

The clouds pass each other by

The petals from flowers run high.

Walking alone down a straight path

No one around

No one in sight

Calm is the air

Calm are the trees

Still are the flowers

Slow walkers are the clouds

Free willing

Free spirited

Freedom when?

Freedom where ever it pleases.

Reviews

[SAYED THANGAL]

Hi, though the poem is written on behalf of wind, I see this as a mystic poem,the wind is the God, invisible but felt, have all the capacities, good writing.
sayed thangal