I Hold On

I Hold On

A Poem by Alicia Huntley

I hold on
To what I love
I hold on too tight
I hold on 
Even while it slips away. 
I hold on 
because I am afraid 
I hold on to what I know
I hold on
even  the Ibad. 
I hold on
until i cannot hold longer
I hold on to that breath
i hold on
instead of letting go.

© 2014 Alicia Huntley


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"You to Me" was a beautiful poem, Alicia - the force coming through.

I think of the two, this one, "I Hold On", and the other "You to Me", I was in particular more drawn to the latter kind of writing.


I think you write whatever the specifics nevertheless lovely content.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Alicia Huntley

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I can relate to this one, i hold on the things to much as well, im to scared to move forward, and to scared to let go.
I enjoyed this not only because i can relate, but i love that its written from the heart, with great meaning.
Great write :))

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alicia Huntley

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying it!
cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Years Ago

your very much welcome :)

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Alicia Huntley
Alicia Huntley

Ottawa, Canada



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