closerthanthis

I wish we were closer

closerthanthis

days full of laughter

nights spent in sweet surrender

taste of your kiss

where did our time go

when did that open door close

now, all we're left with

are memories of our beautiful miss...

Reviews

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:: you write very moving poetry, sweet alisa... you weave those 'memories' magically... maybe your prince charming is the one to whom you can send all your poems and say... 'i saw you' in so many... but now i've finally met you... and even then the damn prince might be turning into a frog every other minute and reading your poems but not saying a word... as in my case... lol... life sucks... it takes centuries for frogs to turn into princes... and then they have to know how to stay that way and turn back into frogs... :P

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very touching love poem...and i like the spacing you did with "closerthanthis" ala ee cummings...

works well with the theme.