Pathways

his memories, contorted

flowing from some other dimensional realm

fractured and broken in pieces

reflecting what's left along the recesses of his convoluted mind

on a good day

he sees tomorrow

brimming with hope for the future

on most days,

disaster

on most nights,

napalm...

Reviews

[Hi]

This piece funnels. It draws the reader in from a relatively vague metaphor to the very specific "napalm". It concentrates the "fractured and broken pieces" into a word picture. I think it also represents a possible reality; with the hinting of bitterweet, or actually sweet moments. Thanks.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Matt for stopping by again. I wonder what happened last time?

lol

Wishing you well.


Alisa