My World

in my world

you are everywhere

still,

I close my eyes

and you are near.

your voice

I hear

and remember-

the excitement we shared

our silly dares,

laughter into the morning sun

we were happiness,

we were one ...

Reviews

[Ardra]

So sweet yet sad Alisa...
Memories... :) they are beautiful...
But always sad when that loved one is no more around...to create new ones...

[Alisa Js]

Thank you... for your time and comments

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Short romantic and nostalgic write; but I couldn't help feel it was conveyed in the 'past tense' … so made me go hummmmm! :-)

[Alisa Js]

Memories made are powerful

[D Ruppert]

Beautifully written as always. Very reflective, as if remembering someone you lost.

[Alisa Js]

Thanks David...

I appreciate your time and comments. I am inclined to believe that in the matters of the heart, time stands still...especially in those arenas of heart treasures.

Make sense? I hope so.

I trust all is well.

Alisa ;-)