Such thoughts as these

 I loved you with a fierceness beyond comprehension

where even the sun turned away in shame,

if it were possible and it was.

latitude, longitude

it matters not.

whispers abound around those clouds above

secrets kept,

fortunes churned

and yet

the moon above gazes silently

as stars prance along the evening sky

platitudes mean nothing to this empty part

of my world without you

when did things turn so inside out

right was wrong 

and 

left is right

voices in the wilderness

reminding us of what we left uncovered

never daring to discover

it was a place where miracles waited

glorious magic anticipating

we were one,

against the world

in that place

where memories reign...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when things turn inside out, we are perplexed. Relationships just do that sometimes and there seem to be no answers as to why.
This rips the heart out. Your layout and flow are so good that this poem just rolls off the tongue.
I read it aloud. And thought of my own memories.
j.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you so much, J... I am flattered by your comments... will be by soon.

Alisa