Witness

the effect of poetry

After Witnessing “Eye of the Needle”

she moved in midair

the gesticulations of her body

caused a spiral intonation

grace could be said only in the eye’s view

even an idiot could be awed

the poet though would melt into his awe 

carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Poetry does have an effect on the eyes and souls of the reader. The eye of the needle was a hard place to pass through or a tight gate around Jerusalem. It tells me you have to be humble, caring, loving, sharing and sacrificial to reach the intended goals...Excellent, sir...:)............

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Ana!

This site, the people here have all blessed me by way of ink and love. I'm so joyous you enjoyed the poem.

Regards,
Al

[Papaya]

This makes me think of a soul being released from its body and finding its way through the portal between heaven and earth. lovely poem.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Ed!

Some of these writings burst forth in organic passion.

Regards,
Al

[Country boy183798]

Mesmerizing and beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Every once in a while we find ourselves at the table of spiritual enchantment. What a feast!

Thanks Bacchus!

Regards,
Al

[Bacchus]

This reminds me of a passage in the BIble-
funny how poetry can be so spiritual too-
captures her grace- and we fall.
Very nice write.

[Alfred Kukitz]

There is an enormous joy when an excellent writer named Crimson_ish offers a generous review. Thank you so much!

Regards,
Al

[Crimson_ish]

There's beauty impressed within every syllable, the imagery is so light and bright and graceful, even I'm in awe! Such a precious read! The stage just move from the eye of the needle to the lady dancing and swaying, this is enchanting!

[Alfred Kukitz]

There is love among the poets Emmajoy, her name is Kelly. Thank you!

I feel a grace in your presence.

Regards,
Al