In the Sweetness

I'll never tell

In the Sweetness

Did I find you in the sweetness
your laughter stumbling around corners
You smile falling way behind
Or was it some dream of never seeing you
following illusions in the corners of my mind

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Valentine!

Yes.......it was both. I was thinking of Jane.

Happy Happy '17

Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

Just like many it snuck right up on me and applied its love tap.

Happy Happy '17

Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Lydia!

I loved the way this poem wrapped itself around me.

Happy Happy '17

Al

[Valentine]

Perhaps it was a wish for a little of both. Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wispy write...a mix of memories and longing...

beautiful.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

A bittersweet beauty of a write, Al. So much longing in between the lines. Lydi**