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Debra’s Love

Debra’s Love

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
"

She really loves me

"

Debra’s Love


Lips in a dance

evening velvet

a nothing of beauty

grabs the mind

heart lays across the phantom of love

I hear her coming into me

laden with essence of her soul

I’m gone to the tulips

wishing upon my soul.

© 2018 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Kathy!
I feel a head spin in desire; a tale that finds a fiction knocking on reality's door.

regards,
al

Posted 5 Years Ago


'Debra's Love'
Alfred Kukitz,
A lovely poem you've written here with all inner songs radiating from the soul. I liked it for that reason. It is an inner power which simply flows out from the heart...jubilant, joyful.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 5 Years Ago


Thanks Lydia!

Debra is getting in me a man she always dreamed of loving

Regards,

Al

Posted 5 Years Ago


Breathtaking romance in this one, Al! The love is deep and long lasting. Surely the admiration is well deserved and reciprocal. So beautiful. Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


WOW Jacob!

You captured the relationship in a manner profound beauty!
I read it to her, she said WOW!

Regards

Al

Posted 5 Years Ago


she must be amazing...she is essence invading your aura in such a beautiful fashion.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Thanks John!

This women is really all over my soul. What a trip!

regards,
al

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderful use of words my friend. The words magic and sweet in the appreciation of dear Debra. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2018
Last Updated on August 16, 2018
Tags: lips, dance, phantom, mind

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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