Angelica Kiley

Angelica Kiley

A Poem by Angelica
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Epitaph I have to write one for a project in honors English, this is a rough draft and NOT real

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Everyday

You watched me

Judged me

Tortured me

Then, you made me stronger

Only to start it all over again.

This time,

Worse then before.

A repeating pattern

I grew to know.

Years upon years

I walked with the smile

Genuinely happy

As I watched

Friends become foes

Before my very eyes

Though I tried to keep your words close to me

Reminding me

To never give up hope,

This time, you forgot to make me stronger before you started again.

© 2013 Angelica


Author's Note

Angelica
I would love any feedback or advice as I have never written this way before!

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This is very special.
Appreciate your efforts.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angelica

11 Years Ago

thank you!!
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
Oh wow this is really good!!(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angelica

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!
This has a sense of finality .....I think you did a very good job....Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angelica

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!

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Added on January 31, 2013
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Tags: Epitaph death end suicide tortur

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Angelica
Angelica

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I am a Freshman in high school, and I have always loved to write. I hope that it has some future in my life as it is a way for me to escape. Some of my best pieces are short stories and poetry piece.. more..

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