THE MESSAGE

Down the corridor,

Second on the left

Tea's in the cupboard

Sugars on the shelf.

The cup's on the sink,

Spoons are in the draw

and the milk I think

Is in the fridge door.

So just boil the kettle,

My place is yours

And I'll be home soon

So greet me at the door.

And later by the fire

We'll share some red wine

And naked with desire

We shall remain entwined.

Reviews

[ANTO]

Im sorry I missed this one Andrew. Its reads not like directions to the kitchen to make tea or coffee but rather instructions for a lifetime love to find happiness in your home and by extension in your heart. With a little earthiness added for good measure.
I really liked this one
Good writing A.
:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you ANTO

[Bear]

This put a smile on my face just from the reality in this work of literature. Some people see mundane in simplisity, but it is an artform and you master in it being able to make anything entertaining. Bravo!

[andrew mitchell]

Sorry bear I'm late Thank you for such a big compliment

[nazia]

What a message... So full of emotions and burning desires... Nicely penned. Each line of it enchanting :)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you nazia for your time to review

[sereenaoutloud]

AM my dear friend this was fantastic. starting off kind of innocent and sweet like a invitation to a neighbor or friend but then a little twist at the end as it turned into a lovers words! nicely done

[andrew mitchell]

thank you sereena

[~]

Ohh, what a message. May I ask, where was it written? On a fancy scented letter? :):) i liked the details of each line.

[alf]

Hi Andrew. What an invitation! Loved that innocuous build-up that suddenly flared with such smouldering with passion. What a finale!! Hope she made in time to be there first!! alf