SEASONS

Colours by day

Black and white by night.

Four seasons of difference

Who show their significance

By changing colours, but not of night

Which remains black and white.

 

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew, This one has me a little flummoxed. I get what you are saying about the seasons and night staying black and white, but to me, and this is only my opinion, there is something missing. Have no idea what, is just seems . . . unfinished?? maybe you couldn't quite get on paper the depth of your thought in this one. I'd be interested to hear your comments, alf

[ANTO]

Very clever Andrew - I wish I;d written this one. I really like this. :))

[sereenaoutloud]

this flows really wetland i really liked it! I'm missing the snow for some reason right now so the image this painted for me was snow covered found with a grey hue under the darks night sky!

[Myzery]

I really like this one. I really like the flow. And I'm really drawn to anything that has to do with black and white or colors. :D

[Valentine]

How true, and I will be so glad when this white snow heads down your way. Valentine

[Chameleon]

Excellent writing , has a Shel Silverstein feel to it, very fluid.

Chameleon

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Simple and true logic. I liked it. Your words and ending is true.
"By changing colours, but not of night
Which remains black and white."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote