MARVELS HERE AND FAR

its a little spinoff from another poem of mine

High up in the mountains,

Deep below the sea

To all nature's marvels

How they fascinate me.

To all those distant planets

And all those shining stars

Far beyond the atmosphere:

They're all marvels to me.

Reviews

[~]

Andrew, a beautiful description of things that fascinate not only you but all of us.
If I may offer a suggestion. The last line seems to leave the poem incomplete. What do you think of replacing it with another descriptive verse? Let me know if I can help in any way :)

[Death's Poet]

Beautiful. I love the almost childlike sense of wonder in this. Great reminder that it would probably do us all some good to just sit and think about how amazing our world and universe truely are. Beautiful poem. Write on haha :)

[alf]

Hi Andrew. What a truly brilliant place to leave that poem. It challenges the reader to think on . . . and on . . . and maybe become creative at your non-vocalized urging. Way to go!!! Loved the brevity of the verse as well, alf

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nice! Short, and simple, but cuts straight in the point. That is straight in to what you wanted to say. :)