2015 Whoosh!

2015 Whoosh!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Time is flying past. 
Whoosh!
I can't catch up
Already three months gone! 
"Threeeee!" I can't believe it! Next four!
I can't slow down.
Whoosh!
Too much to do.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Whoosh..time is flying by like the wind..doubtful it will ever slow down..feel the urgency in this piece..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

yes Fran Its scary lol how time is passing before my very eyes and before I can catch my breath lol
Tell me about it, and just like a holiday it speeds up as we go. Nicely expressed in a voice that indicates incredulity and moderate panic!

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thanks John, Yes the faster the time flies, more is the panic by me!! Its in sync! lol
"Whoosh" - one of the best words ever invented - makes me laugh everytime.
This is a wonderfully light write Andrew - like a slice of angel cake with tea.
Love it.
But slow down my friend - don't want you getting yourself into tizzy.
Thanks for everything Andrew.
:)))

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you my friend ,ANTO. Its nice to mix the light with the dark lol. Your reviews , your insight .. read more
ANTO

10 Years Ago

You're too kind. Thank you Andrew. You always humble me with your comments. :)
I completely understand this feeling! I love this poem. It's truth with a splash of humor

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you Shadow Poet , kind words
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alf
Hi Andrew. Yeah, the first trimester is the worst, if you're pregnant. Love this for the truth of it!! alf

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

alf you make me lol thanks alf

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