MR BREVITY NUMBER ONE!

FTLedrew

An archer with his arrow

Bullseye number one.

A golfer always swinging

Another hole in one.

A boxer with a punch

Knock-out hundred and one!

He is called Mr. Brevity

And he's WC's number one!

I await for the news

For that day will come;

A chapter in a dot,

A book in a word,

A series in a sentence,

I know its all absurd!

But here I am

A witness

A write before my eyes

I see FT's brevity

Again and again......

And I'm not going blind!

 

Reviews

[B]

FT has a gift .... and is a gift

And this write is quite a cool thing to do

I love your style, humor and heart :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Nisreenaa and ditto!:)

[Beccy]

I love FT's work; succinct and word clever always.

Lovely tribute to a fellow poet Andrew.

Beccy.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Beccy and he is that indeed

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful tribute to a fellow poet. Fitting indeed...:)......................

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks SAMI

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome...:).......

[....................]

Andrew... what a wonderful piece to honour my work... I'm speechless so I will keep it brief... thank you :) - FT

[andrew mitchell]

You are welcome FT

[alf]

Hi Andrew. YES!!!! I saw your comment earlier and this is so fitting, I can't believe he can use a dozen words to describe something it would take at least a hundred for me to do!! Love the poem, it so belongs on these pages, alf

[andrew mitchell]

Alf Its always good to have you by my side and your comments of brevity inspired this write. I now ponder about you , a write about you alf lol I say in a loud sinister laugh

[alf]

That would be soooooooooo vey interesting!!!! Did you catch that accent!!!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol in the palm of my hand lol

[alf]

Breath bated!!!!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice tribute to the Sultan of senryu filled with your usual wit Andrew.

[AaronFreitas]

What an awesome tribute to an awesome writer! Beautiful write Andrew :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my friend!

[sereenaoutloud]

Your heart is so big AM!! Such a lovely tribute to FT.,,I agree i await his book of awesome writes too!!
This is a brilliant piece with such wit as always! Bravo AM

[andrew mitchell]

And a blushing piece I shall write for you just for you just because ... lol:0 Thank you sereena. I have to whisper now actually FT wrote this I got it in my mail and I've published this on his behalf but don't tell anyone . :)

[andrew mitchell]

Don't say anything! As they say Mum's the word

[sereenaoutloud]

LL's lips are sealed LOl

[Jamestown]

A tribute piece to a phenomenal poet that anyone that can read will
certainly agree deserves, aka Mr. Brevity as good as it gets and when
you think it can't get any better, it does! Great write AM class act but
I wouldn't expect anything less from you my dear friend, thanks for
sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Jamestown , AND Just you wait when you get yours!!!! lol:)