Seemed to

The words that I read

I cannot agree

The words you speak

I want to erase

I don't understand

Why you think that way

When in the past

You seemed to care

When I felt that way

When you cried

And yet you still call it

stupid to think about

Author's Note

Never say it again

Reviews

[alf]

Heart from the heart!!! This is writing emotions in raw form and has a very powerful plea for understanding. Love this Limno!!! Another poem of might!!! alf

[Amber Lily]

Such little text and yet, emotions are practically spilling out of this piece. It's always scary when people finally bring up things they've kept inside for so long, many of us don't know how to react. You have completely captivated this feeling here.

[sereenaoutloud]

This is a very personal and raw write,...i agree with Dan it is like overhearing a private conversation! The style and format help to create the impact!
Love it Limno :)

[Wasekera S Chiphazi Ban..]

love the concept of the poem,the flow and the wording.. Good job

[B]

i like how natural you are in your writing style
very straight forward and speaking from your heart

You ask many open ended questions
Maybe you are in a state of discovering this person

[dan]

A very clearly personal spectrum of questions and statements, I almost feel as if I'm listening in on a conversation I have no business hearing. A personal-type write like this, in my opinion, invites the reader to feel as if he/she is really in on something. Very nice write. take care...dan

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
seeing eye to eye sometimes is difficult:(
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Willard Wells]

I think it breaks down to being on the same page. In life we have fights when we are young and later are friends. The stars and the planets just have to align together. But sometimes that alignment never comes and hateful words are said in anger. Wait a few years with an open heart and maybe the alignment will come. Nice work and I like it. Even if I did bring out my soap box.