Changing TV channels

Smooching at the corner

Who cares about the world

Tongues are in a twirl

Her lips begin to swell.

Okay! Stop right there

For twenty thousand dollars

Would you like to

Ask the audience

Phone a friend?

Or lock it in!

The Question again

What makes her toes curl in panty-hose?

A: Mouths   B: Panty-hose stretched

C: I don't want to know D: Lovemaking

Lock in mouths 

Final answer?

Final answer!

                                                Mouths

                                                      gliding

                                                           sliding

                                                              emotions

                                                                     rising.

                                 Her

                                       toes

                                              start 

                                                    to

                                             curl

                                    while

                        tongues 

              swirl.

 Wow! You have just.......

Smootching at the corner

All the world to see

Who cares about the world

It's just you and me.

Oh! A nice music channel!!

Reviews

[RomaJ]

whew! Now that's what I call a kiss. Got my head my head spinning. Wooziness fading. Was there an audience? I hadn't noticed. Loved this write, Andrew. So much flair with this one. Brilliant.

[sereenaoutloud]

oh a kiss (smooch) that can make you forget where you are ..fading out everyone else so it is just the two of you...now that is toe curling kiss! LOL
The format is brilliant!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol thank you for your smile Don't expect it back too soon!!:)

[sereenaoutloud]

lol lol lol lol here have a few :):) :)

[....................]

Wonderful form and content... such a great roller-coaster ride for the reader... I try not to switch channels while smooching :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Masterpoet FTLedrew you smoocher you:)

[....................]

haha, you are welcome you channel changer you :)

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Once again that brilliant imagery conjures up all sorts of thoughts and ideas!!!! I love how you can project pictures into the mind of the reader!!! and then disclaim whet they read!!! Another great write of many levels!!!~ alf

[andrew mitchell]

thank you alf and your great reviews