She was a natural!

She was a natural

Athlete, you know.

Pretty in white.

She ran like the wind.

Through the streets

Once a year.

Town folk looked on

Tourists cheered.

She was phenomenal.

The hurdles, the hundred metres,

The long jump, cartwheels,

The marathon run.

Just her...... alone.

She had a following, 

You know!

Always behind her.

I only wished.....

She'd put some clothes on.

 

Reviews

[Johnson Bobby]

simpicity of words into a sweet letter day come true in secounds
from vissions once in a life vissions she is a cherry blossoms what I
hear may she was running to feel freedom free like a bird sorring
leaving her nest- very beautiful poem thank you i only wish I had
seen her too....

[andrew mitchell]

Hi Johnson You won the jackpot for your comments She is a natural cos she is a naturalist, one with nature which she celebrates each year feeling free in the nude! Thank you JB

[Rinzin Samdup]

LOL...That was cute! :) i do love your writings. thanx for the laugh :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Rinzin

[Relic]

hahaha, that would certainly change things wouldn't it. Funny. :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Relic

[R Smith]

Lady Godiva? I must agree with a previous comment, you truly are one of a kind Andrew and that can only be a really good thing, thanks for the laughs :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Richard for your kind words

[Leif]

This is one of those rare instances where I feel completely downtrodden by the lack of a picture posted above a poem.

[andrew mitchell]

haha me too Leif. I'm not good with computers

[Leif]

I'm just saying....you had time to pen a poem about this epic event but didn't have time to whip out your smartphone to take a pic?

You need to get your priorities in order.

:)

[andrew mitchell]

lol......................lol

[Willard Wells]

Are you sure. Did she look that bad or are you just a puritan. Hahaha Fun piece, well dond.

[andrew mitchell]

Lol Willard I just wanted her to parade for myself haha. Thank you Willard

[Willard Wells]

OK I can see that and like that idea even better. LOL :)

[Cassie]

Andrew, isnt that a mad woman who was running without clothes. ahah

[andrew mitchell]

She could be! there's just not enough of them lol Seriously all fiction And thank you Cassie

[Lyingwithlions]

I must say your poems are one of a kind. So much great imagery and fun to read, because I never know what to expect. ( well kind of, but I'm still always surprised) I can t stop laughing.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you kind sir for the compliment!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, when will I ever learn...there's always a surprise at the end...damn, you're good!

[andrew mitchell]

Good to keep you on your toes Kelly! lol Thank you for your words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Lady Godiva in the olympics....:))))

"she found fame, and made her name..."

fun piece...

[andrew mitchell]

She sure did! Thank you J I'm glad you enjoyed