She broke my mast!

She broke my mast!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

She broke my mast!
On her cannonball shot
I ride,
I couldn't get away
quick enough.
She broke my mast,
the crow's nest told me.
"Abandon ship!"  I cried
Her harbour was not friendly.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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Her harbor wasn't friendly huh, was it her husband that broke your mast. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your words Kathie :)
LOL why do i get the feeling we're not really talking about a ship here? guess she wasn't signaling you to pull into port - always a bad sign. you really are something else.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Metaphorically speaking you are right on the money Pete lol. Thank you for reviewing Pete.

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