Tick! Tock! Moments!

Time stole all my moments,

they weren't mine to keep,

leaving me with memories, 

of a life spent.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Brevity in veritas! like Shylock collecting his "pound of flesh", time takes its due from us all. "they weren't mine to keep"- resonates deeply. Wise words indeed. That is the ultimate lesson we learn. Kudos!

[andrew mitchell]

Yrs sadly annette not for anyone to keep, thanks for a lovely review.

[andrew mitchell]

yes not yrs lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, we just borrow what there is to our lives....and all the while our subconscious hears that timer ticking.

[andrew mitchell]

yes like the days of our lives! Thank you J.